2012 Poetry Month

How Do You Describe a Smell?

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PUPPY PERFUME
by April Halprin Wayland

It’s powdery—
cotton candy and dust
from a carnival midway

It’s musky—
leaf litter
of an old oak grove

It’s all mixed up—
crackers and
couch pillows:

your own furry fragrance
your downy dogness
as I burrow into you each morning.

(c) 2011 April Halprin Wayland, all rights reserved

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The story behind the poem:
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I like to start my day by burrowing my nose into Eli’s neck, hugging his big dog-self.  It’s a soft way into the day.  This morning I noticed how nice he smelled.  Then I tried to put words around it.  As I wrote this poem, I kept going back to Eli and hugging him, inhaling and trying to “get” what the smell was like.  What did it remind me of?
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As one of my dog park friends, James, said, “Humans are visual. We don’t have words for smells because we don’t use our nose as dominantly as we use our eyes.”
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Now it’s your turn: find a smell you’d like to write about.  Take it in. Close your eyes.  What does it remind you of?  Write a poem.

Eli & Elsie…”How do you do?”
or maybe, “How do you smell?

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