Today is my son’s birthday.
I had been trying to describe hunger in a simile to a friend.
I told her that hunger is like close range gunfire. It scares my body that much.
Today, in thinking about a metaphor which describes my son,
I realized that he is exactly the opposite of hunger to my body.
He is delicious.
THE OPPOSITE OF HUNGER
My son is
the opposite of hunger.
My son is
a layer cake
—so many layers!—
with sweet cream between
(this is a rough draft…please respect my (c) 2014. Thank you!)
One Response
Yes to the layer cake metaphor!
And it’s too cool that your son was also born in April. Delicious indeed. 🙂