Snake metaphor

snake about to strike

Here’s a poem I wrote in 2010.
I’ve just spent an hour rewriting it.

Eyeglasses metaphor

Eli with eyeglasses

Not understand the metaphor of yesterday’s compost poem? I’m sure he’s not the only one!

Birds metaphor

The Birds poster

I have a friend who works in the TV biz. I started writing a poem about how tired she was after such long hours.

Shampooing simile

ocean foam

I was at the hair dresser today and in my current state of must find a metaphor, I wondered how I would describe the delicious feeling of her fingers scrubbing my scalp. As she moved me from the shampoo sink to her chair, I scribbled in my little notebook: Scrubbing my soapy head, Mommy’s strong fingers […]

These Dog Poems

Eli at the dog park

It’s always fun to throw an unanswered question or two into a poem.

What I Hope Will Never Happen

Rosie in CAL hat

If you’re my agent,
you tell me my writing stinks
and not to call you
or email
or send you a box of chocolates
or take you to see another Broadway show
ever again.

Black / White

dog park in the dark

After talking with my friend who was snowed-in back east, I met a brilliantly white Akita at the dog park.