Procrastination

Eli on the last day of Poetry Month 2015

PROCRASTINATION by April Halprin Wayland Ancient dog circled in the grass round and round to tamp it down I am dog circling, too round and round as all dogs do round my homework, round my desk finally, working then I rest. published in Cricket Magazine December 2002 also published in my novel in poems, GIRL COMING […]

Clutter metaphor

Clutter cleaned up.

Here are two versions of one of my poems
(with a metaphor that hits you over the head with a hammer).

Raspberries metaphor

raspberries

The “raspberry collective” metaphor I used reminded me of the miniature world in Dr. Seuss’ Horton Hears a Who.