Fence simile

Fence

I found this in my files from 2005 … here’s today’s rewrite.

Crow simile

crow

His wings are as wide as the sky
They blacken the whole schoolyard …

Snake metaphor

snake about to strike

Here’s a poem I wrote in 2010.
I’ve just spent an hour rewriting it.

Eyeglasses metaphor

Eli with eyeglasses

Not understand the metaphor of yesterday’s compost poem? I’m sure he’s not the only one!