What a Metaphor for Aging, I Ask My 91-Year-Old Mother
![Deer and me and Mom](https://aprilwayland.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/Deer-and-me-and-Mom.jpg)
A thief. A thief takes all your assets,
she says lying on the couch,
looking thin, grey, and so very small.
Clutter metaphor
![Clutter cleaned up.](https://aprilwayland.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/CLUTTER-CLEANED-UP-1-26-11-by-April-Halprin-Wayland.jpg)
Here are two versions of one of my poems
(with a metaphor that hits you over the head with a hammer).
Doorbell metaphor
![doorbell](https://aprilwayland.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/doorbell-764x1024.jpg)
Is anyone answering YOUR doorbell today?
Raspberries metaphor
![raspberries](https://aprilwayland.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/raspberries-5-1024x768.jpg)
The “raspberry collective” metaphor I used reminded me of the miniature world in Dr. Seuss’ Horton Hears a Who.
Walking to the Ocean metaphor
![painting](https://aprilwayland.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/painting-1024x683.jpg)
It didn’t seem that far away
when you started …
Dog and Master metaphor
![Eli leaping up tree for squirrel](https://aprilwayland.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/Eli-leaping-up-tree-for-squirrel-4-26-12-2-768x1024.jpg)
What if the whole story is a metaphor?
Pomegranate Seeds metaphor
![open pomegranate](https://aprilwayland.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/open-pomegranate-1024x767.jpg)
Every class is different. How best to describe my students?
Crow simile
![crow](https://aprilwayland.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/crow1-1024x683.jpg)
His wings are as wide as the sky
They blacken the whole schoolyard …
Tissue metaphor
![Tissue](https://aprilwayland.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/TISSUE-kleenex-2-1024x768.jpg)
An invasion…my body’s been taken over by the enemy!
Beast metaphor
![Big Beige Monster of Second Rate](https://aprilwayland.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/Big-Beige-Monster-of-Second-Rate-Writing-10-30-09.jpg)
Have you ever had to fill out an official document that had to be mailed ON DEADLINE somewhere IMPORTANT that involved, say, MATH, which intimidated the stuffing out of you?